alicemargiela's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Sketch Collab 2017]

I liked this! Lots of cool and creative entries from everyone :) Only complaint is RGP's part and HipnikDragomir's part. Rgp needs to learn to not use skews like that because it ruined the flow of it being a "pencil like" sketch collab and in my humble opinion, Hipnik's lacked personality and emotion. Mostly with the lines. Overall, I enjoyed this collab

ValterValyun responds:

Thank you for the helpful feedback! I'm sure we will improve for the next year's collab!

[Africa - NSP (Animated)]

Pretty okay. Try to use skews and tweens less. Try to learn how to draw hands as well, my guy.

[Jaycartoons: Red Base One, Three]

I chuckled. The animation was also minimal, yet a little cute. Please color your backgrounds though.

[Halloween 2017]

scary

drawlifestyle-Anvesh responds:

haha

[MMORPG LOGIC]

The artwork was really good at times. Some parts the characters looked off model. The usage of shortcuts like 1:30 could've been replaced with an animation loop or some other way so it didn't look awkward. Pretty good cartoon though. It did crack me a few smiles here and there.

[The Halloween Collab 2017]

This was a mess as a whole. All the entries either were awkwardly animated or were stretched way too long to the point where I legitimately had to skip JZA963's entry. IvoAluminum needs to learn to stop using the skew technique. It looks terrible. Also black and white shading? Please don't do that. GabbyXD's part was the most decent entry out of this whole collab. What even was Sandling's entry? The cats looked like they were flying instead of leaping and running. Cuteboy99's entry had some "okay" art, but the voice acting was horribly obnoxious. All together, bad collab

cuteboy99 responds:

Thanks for the feedback I think that will be very helpful but I have to disagree with the voice acting was ok in my opinion because the character is suppose to look horrible to make you feel how could his parents been able to put up with him so I am more greatful for the voice actress she delivered when I thought it would not work!!

[Night Shift]

Very good! Loved the little fight scene going on there, boyo. My only problem was the amount of skewing in the animation. Skewing is fairly good when done right or subtle. It just felt out of place for your style of animation, in my opinion. Though this was for school so I would understand why you would choose to use short cuts. Overall, I enjoyed it!