too short and not really good animation. Better luck next time!
too short and not really good animation. Better luck next time!
The animation wasn't all that bad, mang! Pretty edgy for my tastes though, but i love that you are doing your best and that's what matters. I'll be looking foward to your future stuff!
While most of the animation was decent, the art needs more improvement, The feel really stiff and anatomically incorrect. I also felt the singing could use more practice or it just wasn't to my tastes. Decent
The animation was low quality. The writing is in very uninspiring like my Poke La Mon short. No, this is worse than Poke La Mon. Just... why? It's just edgy "haha sex jokes! LOL" The scewing is atrocious, and so as the drawings. Nothing here was funny. Humor was too forced. The only funny thing was when they raise their arms, it reminds me of Family Guy so much. I feel Seth McFarlene was your main inspiration. Yeah. He is, isn't it?
I really appreciate your constructive criticism, I could only aspire to be as great of an artist and well spoken critic as you. I'm sure you will go extremely far in life as you, please teach me your ways
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