alicemargiela's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hartrup and Oatly - The Cutout]

Amazing! Your style and color palettes are to die for *clap emoji*
The humor did it's job and kept me giggling throughout the cartoon. <3 Fantastic job, Basset

[Jaycartoons: Church]

Visuals weren't that interesting to look at and there wasn't really a punchline for a short cartoon. Try adding a colored background on your cartoons, please.

[Not Feeling Pizza]

You colors are too saturated and the line work can be more cleaner. Also, a "triggered" meme? Really?

momomonster responds:

its my first time trying animation so i just wanted to do something short and simple, but thanks for the feed back ill try to keep that in mind.

[Ed, Edd n Eddy in 2017]

this still sucks

[I Pick You]

Super adorable! I adore the very "water like" style you did on this! My only critique is maybe the timing could have been better on the part where the miner guy hits the heart-shaped rock with his pick and the rock reacted. He reacted fairly slow, in my opinion. BUT you know, regardless, this short was amazingly cute!

RedMenace-96 responds:

Thanks! Yeah I totally agree, Timing is something I still haven't quite perfected.

[Coming Soon.]

Comming soon

Zackexe responds:

Sorry.. my english issues.. ^^

[Porygon's Revenge]

Wow another sprite animation on this darn website!!!! WOAH

[Cleaning up oceans]

this is life changing

[E.T. Excursion - episode 02.2]

Pretty good, dude. Pretty interesting style with some good animation. However there are issues. Your use of skews are really distracting! They look so out of place from your art style and you constantly use it throughout the cartoon. I feel it should use them in a more subtle manner. I also recommend that if you're gonna use a "gray" for your character's teeth, I'd add a tint of blue or orange so it doesn't look bland or as if they're teeth look like silver. Aside from all that, I'm intrigued in this series and what direction the story will go.

vezanmatics responds:

Thanks! :D

I'll keep the skewing thing to a minimum in the future, I never thought it was obvious and probably use it as a crutch for when there's not enough movement.
Also the characters' teeth in medieval times are value #CBC5B3 because they've never been cleaned and are kinda grody.