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[E.T. Excursion - episode 02.2]

Pretty good, dude. Pretty interesting style with some good animation. However there are issues. Your use of skews are really distracting! They look so out of place from your art style and you constantly use it throughout the cartoon. I feel it should use them in a more subtle manner. I also recommend that if you're gonna use a "gray" for your character's teeth, I'd add a tint of blue or orange so it doesn't look bland or as if they're teeth look like silver. Aside from all that, I'm intrigued in this series and what direction the story will go.

vezanmatics responds:

Thanks! :D

I'll keep the skewing thing to a minimum in the future, I never thought it was obvious and probably use it as a crutch for when there's not enough movement.
Also the characters' teeth in medieval times are value #CBC5B3 because they've never been cleaned and are kinda grody.

[Cartoon series in the works]

Looks promising. Though one critique is to fix his/her left arm because it looks fairly shorter than his/her other arm. I'll try to see any later updates to this cartoon you're making.

StudioMnesia responds:

Thank you! Thanks for the critique btw! Although I am making this cartoon "for fun" for YouTube to be honest. I lack self-esteem so I really don't expect this project to attract major companies to hire me. I definitely appreciate even with that error of mine, you find my work promising! :D

[If Bill Cipher Was An Overwatch Hero]

It was pretty alright. I do recommend fixing your poses and your line work. The poses look really stiff and the line art is way too thick. However, i do enjoy the creativity you did by having Bill Cipher interact with the Overwatch characters. Overall, it's a pretty fun cartoon that has visual flaws that can be improved in the later future. :)

Deltaplanet responds:

Thanks, thick outlines and the animation type is my style btw and I'll be sticking to it.

[Peridot Pac-Man and a Slice of Bread]

I really enjoyed this in a weird way. i really like how it's going for that Aqua Teen Hunger Force style, heck you even use music from it. I'm looking foward to Episode 2

Kelsland responds:

Thx man i really miss aqua teen hunger force

[Killin' Time]

Hella rad! I loved the style and all the creativity put into this! Very well done :)

ThatJemmaGirl responds:

Thank you so much :D

[Oney Plays Animated: Video Game Talk]

This was pretty mediocre to be honest. The characters were really off model and not the good kind of off model. There was no focus on the animation. Everything moved all over the place and the lines needed to be more cleaner. Better luck next time!

Eniladep responds:

Thanks, I'll try harder next time.

[Dancing 3D Elephant Man (New Version)]

What in the world? That's terrifying lmao

KarltoonLD responds:

Thank you, kindly.