alicemargiela's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Human Trash]

Lots of animation inconsistencies mostly with inbetweens, which there wasn't many, and the line art. However, I liked how this music video was directed and shot. The music is ok but that's just personal preference. I give this a light to decent 4 on this submission trans-

Bingleheimer responds:

Yes it's much more of an animatic - I'm experiencing with how to quickly pump out monthly content that I don't completely dislike. Heavily modeled Brad Neely's early work this month ... which is purely animatic.

[The Foot Licker (Bad Dream Jam)]

Lol this was great dude! Animation was a goodie

snailpirate responds:

Thanks!

[Fired]

Put this somewhere else that isn't newgrounds.

TrolerVD responds:

IDC abaut your desision Į like to create this stuff this iš my thing Į like what Į do Į have 0,00 money a month and 0 members ši exept what You get from Me You .....

[BOY!]

Humor was kinda meh, tho tiny bart saying "yes papa" is the best thing I've seen and heard today. The animation and coloring on here is pretty spot on, except the blue shading on their yellow skin could've been toned down, but that's just a nitpick of mine. Good work, man. Will look out for more of your work

Carmet responds:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

[Hiro the Dense]

The humor may not have hit me at all and kind of strike me as forced, but I do think you can draw very well, mostly women. My issues are that you're animation is so limited, to the point where the boob animations on some points were pretty bad, mostly at 3:28. Breasts don't stretch midway when they're jiggling. I also felt the whole "lol the main character is supposed to be a heroic protagonist but his only personality is that he's actually stupid" bit's been done to death and I feel the whole point of this cartoon was to just draw tits and ass. Oh and the punchline at the end, classic memery!! or should i say MEMEtastic?? :)C

ZedrinBot responds:

It wouldn't be a dad joke if it didn't successfully piss a few people off

[Shoot for the Moon]

I thought this cartoon was sweet. Plot might've been pretty redundant with the "this thing wants to go to this thing so they try to go to the thing but then loses hope after few tries but it all goes well in the end and goes to that thing" plot, but I thought it was still cute, mostly when they hug and spin. I think that your usage of skewing should be toned down more because it was often used here and it really bothered me a lot. There's some really good frame by frame parts in this. Wished you used those skills on the skewing/tweened parts. I didn't really like the space ship part where it tweened all over the place. Try redrawing frames of the ship bouncing like jello, kind of like what Studio Gainax/Trigger does in their stuff, since it would have fit your simplistic cartoony art style. I also feel the characters weren't described well or introduced to us. They were just... there. You should've given us more time to in-depth and make us get to know the characters more in the beginning. Props on you for uploading on Newgrounds though. All together, I think this short was cute but sorta two-dimensional and rushed lookin. I believe you can make a better cartoon. You got some talent in ya

DoTheDood responds:

Thanks, this was my first short and was pressed for time (As this was part of what I needed to graduate this year). I honestly do agree on the ship part and some "tweening" (I actually didn't do much tweeting, but a lot of editing frame-by-frame, which basically looked like tweening. Kind of lazy I admit), and this criticisms are really helpful for the next short/animation I work on

[FranzWorld- Rock para perros]

terrible eddsworld rip off, enough said

FranzWorld responds:

ok xd

[Hands]

Funk shit, I dig this a bunch!

loberoso responds:

Cool! Thanks

[Ack Ack Ack]

fix your audio quality next time, this was painful to hear

DrCasket responds:

Sure, what exactly was wrong with it?

[Stardew Valley Animation - The TRUTH about Mayor Lewis's Package]

Wow this is a no good, very bad cartoon. The tweening and skewing on this animation is very lazy and really unbearable. Please consider redrawing frames and inbetweening your movements. You guys didn't even bother coloring your drawings at the end. The joke here could've been funny if it weren't for the old dude's annoying voice. You should have gotten a professional voice actor who can do an impression of an old dude. In a nutshell, this wasn't good. Improve on these mistakes next time.

WrongWayAnimations responds:

Thanks for taking the time to watch our video and sharing your thoughts with us!