alicemargiela's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sonic 8 Bits in Sonic 16 bits?]

i like cars

mthanimations01 responds:

okay???

[Damn SpongeBob]

Was kinda funny, actually, though your audio could've been better in quality and your animation. Most of it were skews and and tweens and the drawings were fairly simple. Most of line work thickness was inconsistent and looked kinda sloppy. Still, it's better than your older works. Keep practicing kiddo

Snackers responds:

thanks for the legit criticism, even if this was a shitpost lol. i'm hopefully getting a proper mic soon, so i'll have fun recording stuff with it then.

[Sonic 1 Act 01]

This was really neat yo

Flaxor responds:

Thanks a lot!!

[RobinRaid: Opening]

GOD, this is messy. How this got a daily 2nd is beyond me. The music bad, man. Get a song that will fits your intro. No one wants to hear ear piercing 8-bit music. It's so out of place and it's such a drag to listen to. You could at least make the music intro have better audio quality. I'll give you massive props for attempting to do some creative, complicated shots, so good on you, dude. Also, by the looks of it, you have no clue how the female body works. Try google searching nude women and study their body proportions and sketch some out. It would really help you improve your characters and make them look more pleasing to the eye. HenryEYEBALLS pretty much said what needed to be said. Just take these into deep consideration and you'll be fine later.

Captain-Freeman responds:

thank you for the review. the music I've added to replace effectators music doesn't fit much better either, but at the least its not as sharp or grating.

and the anatomy part is not a fair statement. I still have plenty to learn about it, and how to work it into animation, but so say that I have no idea how it works seems hyperbolic.

either way, if you feel it's only worth half a star out of 5, I respect your opinion

[O HOLY NIGHT (southpark fan animation)]

Hey not bad! I really liked this a lot. Your style could use improvement like making your lines more polished
Nonetheless, nice job yo

NappySocks responds:

thank you so much my dude!

[Wrong !]

I don't know what I just watched. Was the guy stroking his stache evil? What was the story? Joke? The composition was pretty iffy, too. Some things were too zoomed in. Also what did the mustache person even say? I could barely hear him. Your art/animation also needs improvement, too. Try doing short animation tests in your own time instead of posting random unfinished looking animations.

WillMcMuffin responds:

Thank you for your review, to answer your question , the mustache guy said that in exactly 5 minutes the other guy will die. Technically, this was kinda a test but i needed to post it to have reviews and understand what i should improve.
Next time i'll spend more time on the story and the comprehension instead of animating something that i just vaguely thought about.

PS: you're lucky, you haven't seen the animation i did BEFORE this one...

[Shinchan Cena | WWE Entrance]

Copyrighted music.

JacksonS7R responds:

EVEN THE CHARACTERS ARE ALSO COPYRIGHTED

[Heppy Knew Yeer!!!]

Well, there goes that funny meme.

xNinja202 responds:

Why so rude